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Well I finally decided to take the plunge and do it. It'll take a while but I plan to do the whole story though I may have to add a few pages to accommodate all the dialogue I put in.
Page two is here. [link]
The original script is here. [link]
Total Drama Island, Harold and Leshawna are properties of Fresh TV.
Page two is here. [link]
The original script is here. [link]
Total Drama Island, Harold and Leshawna are properties of Fresh TV.
Image size
1344x2265px 599.73 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi
Shutter Speed
1/60 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
18 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Oct 14, 2008, 8:02:21 AM
© 2008 - 2024 EdGPatterson
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Overall
Vision Originality Technique ImpactThis is a very wonderful comic. full of drama romance and laughs, it will instantly grab the reader's attention. In the first panel one of our main characters is knocking on the door. The fist is very good, almost matching Total drama island style. In the second panel our main heroine is yelling to her mother. The face is very descriptive making it seem like just another day. The third panel: The face is very revealing. Without even reading the word caption you can tell she's surprised.The forth panel is my least favorite panel. His loose hair comes in VERY awkwardly. it looks odd. The face is very long. Too long. Next time i suggest making the face shorter. The flowers he is holding are wrapped too long. You can barely see the flowers. The fifth panel:The tight bear hug idea is wonderful but, Harold's hands are kinda awkward and his fingers look like twigs. The 6th panel is just fine. Dear readers, keep reading, it gets better and better!