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Here is my design for the 2008 Rah Cha Cha Ruckus competition. Since the game was somewhat racing based it made logical sense to do a checkered flag and I changed the logotype to make it more sleek and fast looking.
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© 2008 - 2024 EdGPatterson
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^-^ Retarded sixth grader? Hahaha!
Anyways, onto the critique! Bad-then-good style.
First the bad
-The waving flag and the waving text don't line up, they collide and that makes the picture look unbalanced. If you had either made the flag wave match the way the text was waving, or vice versa, it would have balanced better.
-The typography. Mainly one issue here, you used 3 different fonts, the rule of thumb is actually just two.
The good
The flyer is incredibly simple, everything from the coloring to the design, and that is wonderful.
I get the message, and that's the whole goal of a flyer.
The design matches the criteria, and that's really important.
Reaching the target audience-you did. End of story. ^-^
Overall, for a flyer, you get 4.1/5. You did everything a flyer was supposed to, but it didn't exactly blow my mind if you get the idea.
Anyways, onto the critique! Bad-then-good style.
First the bad
-The waving flag and the waving text don't line up, they collide and that makes the picture look unbalanced. If you had either made the flag wave match the way the text was waving, or vice versa, it would have balanced better.
-The typography. Mainly one issue here, you used 3 different fonts, the rule of thumb is actually just two.
The good
The flyer is incredibly simple, everything from the coloring to the design, and that is wonderful.
I get the message, and that's the whole goal of a flyer.
The design matches the criteria, and that's really important.
Reaching the target audience-you did. End of story. ^-^
Overall, for a flyer, you get 4.1/5. You did everything a flyer was supposed to, but it didn't exactly blow my mind if you get the idea.